Monday 14 May 2012

Marrysong, by Dennis Scott


He never learned her, quite. Year after year
That territory, without seasons, shifted
under his eye. An hour he could be lost
in the walled anger of her quarried hurt
on turning, see cool water laughing where
the day before there were stones in her voice.
He charted. She made wilderness again.
Roads disappeared. The map was never true.
Wind brought him rain sometimes, tasting of sea -
and suddenly she would change the shape of shores
faultlessly calm. All, all was each day new;
the shadows of her love shortened or grew
like trees seen from an unexpected hill,
new country at each jaunty helpless journey.
So he accepted that geography, constantly strange.
Wondered. Stayed home increasingly to find
his way among the landscapes of her mind.

Story
The speaker of this person is an anonymous third person, but it is about the relationship between a man and a woman, and how it changes and develops over time as they go through life, get to know each other better, and yet still find the other one strange and mysterious.

Tone
This has a varied tone, but overall it is reflective. It gradually becomes more excited and lively as it goes on, reflecting their relationship becoming both more interesting and more tempestuous over time. The last three lines are much quieter and more conclusive, however, and give a sense of resolution.

Deeper Meanings
The poet is showing how love is like a journey, and is getting the idea across that love is full of ups and downs, not always perfect, and not necessarily leading to people understanding each other. However, this changing and this mysterious element to it make it exciting, as well as dangerous. It suggests that ultimately the most exciting adventures people have are those that take place in the heart, not in the wild outside world.

Structure and Form
The poet has structured the poem to get across the idea of surprises and changes, which is shown by the placement of punctuation in the middle of lines, enjambment, very short sentences, and the shift between regular meter/ rhythm, and irregular/more jumpy meter and rhythm.
The poem is basically in iambic pentameter and without the last 3 lines is a sonnet of sorts; perhaps this reflects the idea of the poet looking at something which is both unfamiliar and familiar; taking the familiar sonnet form and changing it, as the love he describes keeps shifting between familiar and unknown.

Prominent Words
learned her’ – the idea that he is studying her, she is complex
‘accepted’ – by the end of the poem he has found some resolution
‘constantly strange’ – always difficult to understand/ unfamiliar
‘on turning’/ ‘suddenly’ – how quickly their relationship changes                                                                                                  
‘cool water’ – her voice is refreshing, almost thirst quenching for him


Imagery & Symbolism
Journeys and exploration: the centre metaphor in this poem is the idea that love is like a journey through wilderness: this highlights how love is dangerous, exciting, unknown, everchanging etc.
Mapping: ‘territory’, ‘charted’, ‘map’
How people try to understand and categorise their feelings
Nature/ time: the sea, days, wind, hours, years: these are images which
show love to be powerful but ever changing.
Pain/ difficulty: ‘stones’, ‘anger’: how love is not just the ‘good times’

Sound
The iambic pentameter creates a certain liveliness in the poem, to reflect the excitement of the ‘journey’ he describes. There is little alliteration or rhyme, perhaps reflecting the ever changing and unpredictable nature of the relationship being described. There is some subtle sibilance, however, for example ‘suddenly she would change the shape of shores’, which adds a calmness to the atmosphere of the poem.

28 comments:

  1. ^^^^^^ deadassssss faxxxxxxxxxx

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  2. dude this poem is about a guys wife who can't seem to make up her mind...

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    1. dude cmon guys this poem is a deep one that very few people get so... I mean just stop giving bad comments if you don't know what it means

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  4. this poem is amzingly surprising .i personally hated it
    this poem really sucks

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  5. Does anyone know the circumstances that inspired Scott to write this? The first interpretation of the last sentence,

    "Stayed home increasingly to find \ his way among the landscapes of her mind"

    that came to mind was that this is what victims of domestic violence do: retreat from friends and family. Is the poet doing this, but before the language of domestic violence, so still 'covering up'?

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    1. it's not about domestic violence, the context was femminism during the era so basically it's a man that tries to understan her wife's changes of mood and different ideas

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  6. Hey guys, im right now sitting in the english class and really enjoyed your comments thanks for that. but you got so much hate in your words. thats not very nice

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  9. the analysis was quite superficially explained, but the poem is remarkable at a deeper extent

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  10. i loved this poem and thank you for the analysis. Thank you so much. It really is interesting and i can say i relate to it

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